Last Wednesday, as part of our series on writing better web copy, I talked about the cave man brain and how you should tailor your copy to resonate with that part of the brain.  This is such an important concept, I thought I’d pick up where I left off.

Speak simply.  Do you ever stop and think while you’re writing, “What’s a better word for ‘x’?”  If you find yourself doing this, then you’re probably writing copy that’s lofty and is over your customers’ heads.  A good rule of thumb is to write copy so that a 7th-grader gets it.  Now you may be thinking that you have a really sophisticated audience and that they’d be insulted by your dumbed-down writing but they’ll appreciate it rather than being offended.  When you write in a way that’s simple and easy to understand, more people get it.  Now I could have said more people comprehend it but there’s no need to puff up my writing.  Were you insulted when I said people get it rather than comprehend it?

Around the office we enjoy a funny website that “unsucks” complicated, over-thought business jargon and tells what it really means.  Why use the phrase “core competency” when you can just say that you’re skilled?  I get a lot of résumés and most of them have puffed-up language.  It’s obnoxious.  You don’t want your website design to sound like a résumé so keep it simple.

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